Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/25/18, 8:18 PM
Nice
TheGerman
5/25/18, 3:02 PM
"So many boys, so little time" is said. You can't claim that in this case 😄 Everything is in the story, what have to be in it: comprehensible plot, very cool/hot, great style of writing. Recommendable to read for many gays.
Anonymous
5/25/18, 2:14 PM
No don't let it end this way. Please tell us what happens to superman next.
Anonymous
5/25/18, 12:44 PM
You are the most productive writers in the history of this site; I love your style and appreciate your consistency as well as your creativity (and time). Having said that, I wish to see a sequel or prequel : ). Too hot to end here, it’s killing me.
Martin
5/25/18, 11:06 AM
Anyone can edit the tags, looks like someone removed it... I added it again.
TheGerman
5/25/18, 9:33 AM
It's absolutely legitimate to write only a short story which doesn't desripes something closer. Totally okay. There must also be room for stuff like this. But two or three sentences about why or how a transformation is coming about should be possible. It's a little bit pity, that tis is missing. "Magic" is the category - well then...
TheGerman
5/25/18, 8:16 AM
There are quite a few agent stories. So the danger is of being compared to the "competitors". That's why it's good to write such a story in detail, not to short, with a few chapters. So far, that has worked well. That all factions administer a truth serum by sperm is a pretty nice detail in my opinion.
5/25/18, 7:12 AM
As someone who has written a couple of stories and am also an avid reader. I can appreciate this story for what is was. Willie is one of the more prolific and better writers on this site. Even this story was a personal effort that should be appreciated, even if it isn’t your personal cup of cum... err tea.
Trust Boy/Captain
5/25/18, 6:06 AM
Is the superhero tag missing from this story now for anyone else?
Tattcub
5/25/18, 5:59 AM
I think there's totally a place for these stories too. I dunno about lazy but it means that the whole inspiration for the scene was from an idea based on a pic. I think that's pretty cool. I will admit that I prefer where my mind is left to imagine the event along with the description. But when it comes down to it folks, none of us are here for literature. We here to get our rocks off. If it works then what's the problem? It's great to have praise and feedback when it's constructive I really like getting it myself. But if you just want to criticise someone for turning out a story, one of a multitude from one of this site's most prolific writers then make damn sure it's for the right reasons and done with some style for pete's sake. Some of you who don't write and just criticise try dropping a story here sometime why don't you?