Recent Comments

TimNJ
5/23/18, 9:48 PM
The story was fast, fun and hot!
Anonymous
5/23/18, 9:40 PM
And now the 'mastermind' and plot ! VERY good. VERY sexy.
Anonymous
5/23/18, 9:29 PM
U suck. Its too lengthy and not much action. 👋 what do u think youre writing, a freaking novel?
Anonymous
5/23/18, 9:20 PM
I was thinking there were two sets of operatives, the 'good' guys CI and the villains after taking over the drug empire.
Anonymous
5/23/18, 8:54 PM
sexy
Anonymous
5/23/18, 8:35 PM
how'd he do it ? sexy ( of course the 'selfies' add to the sexuality )
Anonymous
5/23/18, 8:16 PM
No offense but I disagree. This type of writing is quick and sloppy. It doesn't describe your characters with any detail whatsoever, or give the reader the ability to imagine the situation unfolding. Instead you provide tons of photos that most of the time seems super exaggerated and out of place. Also you don't explain how the Transformations happen, why the person's doing it, or even how they're able to do it. This I'm sure may seem like a super harsh critique but it's just my personal opinion that you in the past have been a much better writer, when you actually had to describe your situations and characters in your stories better. Instead of you just giving a short vignette with lots of pictures.
Anonymous
5/23/18, 7:52 PM
Terrific Great photos
Anonymous
5/23/18, 7:46 PM
Very nice. Might be good to include how Master controlled the team in a sequel.
Anonymous
5/23/18, 7:27 PM
There should be videos