Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/22/18, 2:09 AM
Given the theme I thought the changes were appropriate. Still room for individual imagination and the writing style was well done and clear. I liked it. My only criticism, and it's generic to all stories on here, is the use of foreign language. Some stories make you look up the meaning and intent if you're interested enough. yours are short enough to extrapolate both.
5/22/18, 1:10 AM
Wonderfully done!
Anonymous
5/21/18, 9:46 PM
Thanx god the tables were not turned. Waiting for the chapter he degrades his brother
May 16, 2018
Anonymous
5/21/18, 9:08 PM
Very creative idea
Anonymous
5/21/18, 9:01 PM
This story reminds me of "Learning his place " by Lunkdunk
Max
5/21/18, 8:03 PM
Hey Londongear, still hoping for another chapter of this incredibly hot story!
cc532c@att.net
5/21/18, 7:49 PM
I love the way you take a character I can identify with and turn him like that. And Max's detailed description of Andy's new gay psyche was HOT! Also, I think I'm in love with Kara.
Anonymous
5/21/18, 6:24 PM
Was worried for a second there haha. Hopefully we get so see some more from you!
Anonymous
5/21/18, 5:28 PM
nice idea and good writing as always. Loved the first picture. Would have preferred Brad stay a guy and become gay.
Anonymous
5/21/18, 3:51 PM
Excellent!!! I loved it.