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Anonymous
5/19/18, 2:48 AM
Great introduction part 2 as I t nicely set the stage to make several scenarios coming next quite convincing. I really like your writing style/perspective, which quite fits this setting and narrative. I wish to see dramatic transformation of James from a guardian of social justice and an icon of common sense as a good lawyer to those corrupted to protect pleasure and profits and an icon of evil serving Sauland porting his business. No matter where this story goes I’m on it!!
5/19/18, 12:15 AM
I hope it wasn't wrong of me to post all the chapters within a single day. It may feel like too much all at once. But oh well ... it's too late now for me to sparse out the chapters. I want to thank one of my readers that chose to contact me. I always enjoy hearing from people that share my particular kinks and fantasy. But the reason I need to thank this particular reader is he said how much he got off on "forced" transformations. And I agree. There just seems to be nothing better than watching a helpless victim be forced into collective gay sex. So with that in mind, I felt compelled to add one more chapter. That's why the first three chapters are Nathan willing offering himself up. And why I call this last installment "The Forced Offering". BTW ... I'm going to reveal something personal here. I very much imagine myself the protagonist giving the three offerings. In real life, my name is (in fact) Nathan. I'm revealing this because over the years, my stories have allowed me to connect with many of you. Many of you have been kind to contact me and tell me how much you've enjoyed my kinky ideas, and shared common interests in what I write. So I don't mind revealing my real, given name. I do so in the hope that it will allow all of us, who have this crazy fantasy of mind-control/hypnosis/gay sex/what-not will all continue to grow closer as a community. (Sorry if that last sentence was a bit incoherent) Anyways ... Hi guys. My name is Nathan and I'm a rubber / mind-control / gay sex enthusiast. It's great to meet you all. I think and hope I'm in good company.
Martin
5/18/18, 10:42 PM
SO HOT...
Anonymous
5/18/18, 9:38 PM
Need to see what happens next!
Anonymous
5/18/18, 8:49 PM
While I enjoyed the story seemed slightly rushed to me.
AeonFlux
5/18/18, 7:35 PM
Can't wait for the next offering
AeonFlux
5/18/18, 7:26 PM
PLEASE ........ go on with it
5/18/18, 6:36 PM
This is such a distillation of your core themes, rubbrsome: all the signs of Nathan's identity are being stripped away until he's transformed into a totally featureless thing, part of an undifferentiated mass.
5/18/18, 5:45 PM
Martin I wish this was my life's story. I wish the many stories that I have written would come true. That would be so fucking amazing. I guess this story sorta started as a resume. Or an advertisement. If there's some secret organization, looking for willing slaves to convert to whatever purposes they are set out to do ... well .... you'll see whether Nathan is dedicated enough to offer himself up. And Null0byte ... thank you for the compliment. When I write out my story, I try to do two things. I play it within my mind's eye as if it were movie. As I watch it, I make small changes as if I'm the director. I have the actor's redo their scenes over and over. And I only begin writing when I've gotten hard and the entire production has caused me to jack myself off. If I feel the story has been worthy and caused myself to get aroused ... then I feel it's ready to be told to others.
TheGerman
5/18/18, 4:33 PM
Rigorous and relentless. Consistent story.