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rubberman56@gmail.com
5/16/18, 9:37 PM
This is the type of story that I wish could become reality for me.
rubberman56@gmail.com
5/16/18, 8:15 PM
Would LOVE to live in a House full of Spandex hotties.
Max
5/16/18, 7:49 PM
Hey TC, I have complete confidence in where you are taking this story. You've really hooked the reader in the way it's set up - we know something bad awaits James but don't know what. I also wanted to compliment you in your development of James and Max as characters, with little details like James' wisecracking assistant. Defining them so well to begin with makes it so much hotter when we see whatever transformation awaits them. I can't wait!
Tattcub
5/16/18, 6:57 PM
Hey Max, Thanks for your comments. They're very much appreciated. I just wanted to start these stories with an idea of how dangerous the bad guy is. So Max did get roughed up a bit but that didn't happen during the scene itself. I wanted to focus on the powerlessness of the situation for both the good guys to. Trust me the transformations and some righteous justice for the bad guy are on the cards. Keep reading. Many thanks. TC
5/16/18, 6:27 PM
The way our heroes were so totally overcome was terrific. That image of 'Trusty' with the jock on his face, it's straps around his ears -- priceless.
Cordyceps
5/16/18, 5:08 PM
I just have to say, keep writing. Started with the superhero one, interesting choices but classic happy ending. This one surprised me. Dark, beautiful themes, with an end I definitely couldn't predict. I enjoyed the younger brother's perspective personally, but whatever you choose to write next will be a needed addition to this site.
Anonymous
5/16/18, 3:42 PM
Please write more diaper stories
Captain/Trust Boy
5/16/18, 2:56 PM
I’m so happy to see you post this story here, Tom!! Got me hard the first time and gets me hard every other time! :)
Max
5/16/18, 2:45 PM
Super hot but end is way too abrupt! I want to see more of this dynamic duo's transformation into submissive jock slaves!
Max
5/16/18, 1:24 PM
Wow! That was exceptional! I love sinister stories but that was really intense. The way you set up the voyeuristic element for the reader so that we are right there with James watching Max meet his fate but powerless to intervene was amazing writing. My only thought is I hope you highlight the transformation/mind control elements in future chapters - the images of Max bloodied and gagged made the beginning of his takedown seem a bit too realistically like a brutal rape than I am comfortable with. It's way more fun for me to imagine control based on pleasure and pain. The description of his grateful face covered in cum by the end is more what I enjoy. ;-)