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Max
5/16/18, 2:45 PM
Super hot but end is way too abrupt! I want to see more of this dynamic duo's transformation into submissive jock slaves!
Max
5/16/18, 1:24 PM
Wow! That was exceptional! I love sinister stories but that was really intense. The way you set up the voyeuristic element for the reader so that we are right there with James watching Max meet his fate but powerless to intervene was amazing writing. My only thought is I hope you highlight the transformation/mind control elements in future chapters - the images of Max bloodied and gagged made the beginning of his takedown seem a bit too realistically like a brutal rape than I am comfortable with. It's way more fun for me to imagine control based on pleasure and pain. The description of his grateful face covered in cum by the end is more what I enjoy. ;-)
May 16, 2018
Anonymous
5/16/18, 1:02 PM
Humiliation of hairy men just gets me going. Any chance you'd do an father and son? I love the way you humiliate your men. So oblivious. So much power over these straight main. More please !
May 16, 2018
Anonymous
5/16/18, 12:48 PM
I always love the way you mind control men in public. Making them think doing all these perverted acts are normal is just such a turn on. You adding the older hairy guy in the mind control is very hot. Keep it up. I always know I will get to cum a massive load whenever you post a story ! My favourite writer in here ! Xoxo
Anonymous
5/16/18, 11:53 AM
WOW !! Even hotter than the previous one and sufficiently amazing to be a sequel to the original.
May 16, 2018
Anonymous
5/16/18, 11:50 AM
Fuck! this is so hot !
May 12, 2018
Anonymous
5/16/18, 11:33 AM
Plz keep writing!!!
Tattcub
5/16/18, 9:58 AM
Link is here https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/206611 that is if this works
Tattcub
5/16/18, 9:57 AM
Part 2 is up folks. It';s under Never trust Saul Bennett. Hope you enjoy it.
Anonymous
5/16/18, 7:49 AM
More please