Recent Comments

5/13/18, 7:51 PM
I liked the story so far. I wish James would be able to turn the tables and make Saul into a moaning fuck toy for the camera but I know that will not happen. the story is well written with good detail and dialogue.
May 12, 2018
Anonymous
5/13/18, 7:38 PM
OMG so hot!! It made me jizz myself *giggle*
Anonymous
5/13/18, 5:26 PM
This is literally my fantasy copied into text
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5/13/18, 5:25 PM
C.
May 10, 2018
Anonymous
5/13/18, 4:41 PM
Another home run! Keep writing! :)
May 10, 2018
Anonymous
5/13/18, 4:22 PM
So, Lexorius? Why not continue your story? I’m still waiting for chapter 3
5/13/18, 2:00 PM
Thanks Hypnothrill(Long time fan :-) ) Thanks for that. I have quite a few ideas for James' adventures etc and am building on some of those things. I was looking at the dialogue and agree with you. i'll keep an eye on it.
5/13/18, 1:54 PM
This is a great set-up, Tattcub, and it's got me eager to read what comes next. I hope you include a lot of descriptions of the happily drugged Priapus Pictures pornstars, maybe some scenes where James talks to them and gets creeped out by how dumb and happy they seem. Then of course I'm sure Saul will snare James as well--maybe by drugging his water. Eventually maybe even James, now happily working for Priapus Pictures, could somehow bring Manny back into the fold. One suggestion, though: I think you're a really good dialogue writer, but that dialogue would be easier to read if you left a blank line between each paragraph.
May 12, 2018
Anonymous
5/13/18, 12:11 PM
Great story .Wish I could get some of those pills!
Anonymous
5/13/18, 10:34 AM
Why didn’t they shave his balls? I missed the point there. At first I thought Travis would fo it himself but I don’t believe that’s the case.