Recent Comments

5/13/18, 9:52 AM
This is meant to be the only version. Which is why I said it at the top. Just want to get to story together. In all honesty real life has been so rough for a while I've found it difficult to start writing again and wanted something familiar to get on with. I thought re-posting it might give it some new life for me. It will speed up as the changes progress. Pretty much at that point now so I might shift perspectives a little. Thanks for the comment nycboot. Very much appreciated. TC
May 10, 2018
Lexorius
5/13/18, 7:24 AM
OK again. Thank you for your Help and also for this Story. *bighugs* :)) now, this looks better.
May 10, 2018
Lexorius
5/13/18, 7:21 AM
Argh... My handydictionary don't like when i try to write english :))
May 10, 2018
Lexorius
5/13/18, 7:19 AM
Thank you for YouTube Help and also die thus Story. :)) *Big hugs*
nycboot
5/13/18, 5:59 AM
Gee you have so many versions of this. Sometimes you just gotta get it down, spend a few days proofreading, and then let it go and not return to it. Coming from a family of medical professionals, I didn't mind the slow exposition - that's how it works. I like the idea (somehow it reminds me of the cheesy movie "Lawnmower Man") and look forward to seeing how it progresses (though I hope the protagonist doesn't end up like Byron).
May 12, 2018
nycboot
5/13/18, 5:56 AM
Very nice story. I also enjoyed this more than My Black Neighbor, although I agree with AgainstMyWill's comments. Again, very nice story.
Apr 24, 2018
Anonymous
5/13/18, 4:20 AM
I would love to see even more stories of yours with cigars! I can never get enough of cigar body swap stories!
May 12, 2018
Anonymous
5/13/18, 3:38 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!!!
Anonymous
5/13/18, 3:31 AM
Great story! Loved it!!!!
May 10, 2018
5/13/18, 2:16 AM
Funny you mention that, Lexorius. I was the user who did most of the editing for "All Hail the Emperor" when it got posted on the wiki. And it helped to inspire this story.