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cc532c@att.net
5/13/18, 1:41 AM
Very neatly done! You evoked the island background and the assimilation vividly, and the pictures were tasty icing on the cake.
Anonymous
5/13/18, 12:35 AM
I love it! But I hope it isnt turning into the uncle story again, as hot as that was.
May 10, 2018
Lexorius
5/13/18, 12:14 AM
Nice sorry. It could nearly be the Same universe Like my "all hail the emperor" Storys :) https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/125447
May 12, 2018
AgainstMyWill
5/13/18, 12:10 AM
Every topic here is really hitting me where I live - sissification and rimming especially. But I found My Black Neighbor more arousing specifically because the victim was struggling the whole time. The ending here with the shaming and alluding to an internal struggle felt a bit bolted on since the rest of the story there was no awareness of what was happening. I think what turns me on about sissification is the humiliation of it, and there just wasn't any of that since he instantly bought right into it and earnestly loved it with no hesitation at all. This is all just how it hits me, of course, and we've all got different tastes. But My Black Neighbor is one of my favorite stories on here in months, where this one wouldn't quite get me over the edge. Hope the feedback is helpful, I mean it constructively!
May 12, 2018
Anonymous
5/12/18, 11:47 PM
Great incorporation of the sissy aspects and the memory changes. Hot stuff.
5/12/18, 10:30 PM
Well done. I particularly liked how the changes came about gradually, with a hint of uncertainty that very soon turned into acceptance.
Biguycnj
5/12/18, 10:27 PM
Yes I really like this series . I also hope Mark’s dad gets involved but in particular as the final straw in Mark’s resistance before giving into his new found cum dump status
Anonymous
5/12/18, 7:07 PM
SO FUCKING HOT!!! I really hope this becomes a regular series...and I REALLY hope Mark's dad gets in on the action
May 10, 2015
rubberman56@gmail.com
5/12/18, 3:42 PM
Please come abduct ME and train me.
Anonymous
5/12/18, 2:46 PM
Liked the idea and the writing of course. Did not care for the "language". Back story of how it was all started and why these guys were sent to be assimilated would be nice.