Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/11/18, 3:29 PM
Very nice idea & writing
May 10, 2018
AJH219
5/11/18, 1:33 PM
Another rousing and hot story from you, well done! I simply love these kind of oblivious world domination stories because they play so well into my hypno fantasies!
Anonymous
5/11/18, 11:37 AM
I don't REALLY understand what's happening in this story at all, that said, it makes me cum every time
Anonymous
5/11/18, 10:17 AM
Shoulda made them 18+ maybe held back in school a few years due to always playing around/pranks...x.x
Kyle
5/11/18, 7:33 AM
Absolutely brilliant! Loved this story. Great job. Evocative images, great descriptions, well-paced. Excellent.
May 10, 2018
Swizzington
5/11/18, 4:43 AM
Excellent!
Anonymous
5/11/18, 4:34 AM
unlike the first and second chapters, this chapter is not hot. I only thinked about when he said he would bring over friends and train him like a real dog. engaging family is not interesting at all
May 10, 2018
5/11/18, 3:30 AM
Great story! I chuckle here and there reading stories on this site when something is amusing. But I rarely laugh out loud, which is understandable given the material we read here. However, the description of the Sex Games events....well done...."on the parallel bars was absolutely amazing, especially at the end, when the Top caught the Bottom’s cum in his mouth in mid-air." It's good to experience such good humor while also keeping the story totally hot.
Anonymous
5/11/18, 3:28 AM
This was so hot. I would so like to see this continued!
nycboot
5/11/18, 2:59 AM
Very nice idea. If you go to the "Community" area of this website, you will find people who will be willing to proofread your story. With good editing, this could be a real exciting story!