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rubberman56@gmail.com
5/9/18, 9:04 PM
LOVE the story.
Anonymous
5/9/18, 7:58 PM
Was a good premise but I read it after you had apparently spell checked and reposted and it still had errors in it so how bad was it before??
Bonegnawer
5/9/18, 7:03 PM
This is such a creative premise! The internal logic is consistent and it explains itself well. This pushed a lot of buttons for me. Looking forward to where this goes!
M
5/9/18, 5:38 PM
Sign me up for one of this suits as well! Fucking hot story dude! Keep on writing!
Anonymous
5/9/18, 4:25 PM
I will say, I'm a bit disappointed with this one. The first had brilliant pacing, and had care to description of how things changed internally. But it feels like this one is far shorter, jumping past most of the transformation for just a blow job scene. I'd have preferred a long drawn out torture as he starts realizing the changes.
Anonymous
5/9/18, 3:25 PM
Good guy Chris. Really let's you know when he's about to bust his nut lol.
Martin
5/9/18, 3:02 PM
I guess that there might be a controversial discussion about this story and why it's allowed it to be published on this site. Still, whatever you write, please stay civil. And please use the forum, if you want to start a discussion about what is acceptable and what not. Thanks!
Anonymous
5/9/18, 2:55 PM
Love it! I’m glad the girlfriend in this story is actually a character but isn’t just immediately disposable for the sake of the fantasy. That actually makes it hotter.
Anonymous
5/9/18, 11:52 AM
Haha holy cow this story. Someone make this into a video. "'...It was brotherly love I wanted. Not the kind where you beat each other up for the hell of it, but the warm kind, the kind that brings you almost a kind of...delight.' Without warning, Karl felt as if the volume in the room was quickly rising, turning the doctor's last word into an unintelligible sharp whine that kept its pitch for so long, Karl thought his eardrums would break. The sound was so piercing that it seemed to mess with his vision; he blindly flailed his arms, trying to push the doctor away. And then, just as suddenly as it came, the noise stopped dead and Karl's body went slack, his body slumping forward onto his chest. He nearly tipped over the exam table, but the doctor's strong arms wrapped around him and kept him sitting upright. 'There you go,' Burrows said, his voice still steady and low. He placed the device in his hand onto the nearby counter. From its pointed tip, the blue light continued to flash periodically. ..." Love it!
Tim
5/9/18, 10:49 AM
Justice delivered. Nice :)