Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/9/18, 9:25 PM
Absolutely reeking. I love it. Please continue.
Anonymous
5/9/18, 9:22 PM
I think the guys are too young but maybe just change that and continue please it’s very good
rubberman56@gmail.com
5/9/18, 9:04 PM
LOVE the story.
Anonymous
5/9/18, 7:58 PM
Was a good premise but I read it after you had apparently spell checked and reposted and it still had errors in it so how bad was it before??
Bonegnawer
5/9/18, 7:03 PM
This is such a creative premise! The internal logic is consistent and it explains itself well. This pushed a lot of buttons for me. Looking forward to where this goes!
M
5/9/18, 5:38 PM
Sign me up for one of this suits as well! Fucking hot story dude! Keep on writing!
Anonymous
5/9/18, 4:25 PM
I will say, I'm a bit disappointed with this one. The first had brilliant pacing, and had care to description of how things changed internally. But it feels like this one is far shorter, jumping past most of the transformation for just a blow job scene. I'd have preferred a long drawn out torture as he starts realizing the changes.
Anonymous
5/9/18, 3:25 PM
Good guy Chris. Really let's you know when he's about to bust his nut lol.
Martin
5/9/18, 3:02 PM
I guess that there might be a controversial discussion about this story and why it's allowed it to be published on this site. Still, whatever you write, please stay civil. And please use the forum, if you want to start a discussion about what is acceptable and what not. Thanks!
Anonymous
5/9/18, 2:55 PM
Love it! I’m glad the girlfriend in this story is actually a character but isn’t just immediately disposable for the sake of the fantasy. That actually makes it hotter.