Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/8/18, 12:54 PM
Great story, although you could have taken a minute to run a spell & grammar checker on it.
Anonymous
5/8/18, 12:52 PM
I want a suit like that as well
Anonymous
5/8/18, 11:42 AM
Plz more! my pussy is so wet right now
Numberonefan
5/8/18, 8:04 AM
Lol sorry was typing with jizz hands..meant keep up the writing man haha.
Numberonefan
5/8/18, 8:03 AM
This idea if yours is hot as fuck!!! Keep up the man!!! My go to story for jerking now lol.
May 2, 2018
Kyle
5/8/18, 7:15 AM
Excellently written. Unique approach and hot as hell. Well done.
SuperHeroMan
5/8/18, 6:09 AM
Good start. Keep writing. Thanks..
Anonymous
5/8/18, 5:57 AM
A little confuesd , the cop have swaped body with bikes? There are no description about the transformation between cop and biker
david
5/8/18, 5:37 AM
It's pretty funny how Mr. Glasman turned the tables on Mike and his friends. The thought that Glasman could accomplish such a transformation in a few hours is exciting, as is the whole idea of the Mind Palace. I'd love to try it myself, though would be a lot more positive and specific than poor Mike! I'm so looking forward to reading the next chapter to see what you have in mind for Aaron's retribution and how that turns out for him.
Anonymous
5/8/18, 3:34 AM
Thanks, the new summaries are better