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5/7/18, 10:38 PM
Hello, I have modified the summary of the 3 first chapters to fit with the story under. I would like to make it less confusing, it there any specific sections I should address to clarify this story? Regards,
5/7/18, 10:27 PM
About Publishing... The whole story is not ready to be published yet. I need to rework all of it before and it takes me time, a lot of time to have something, I believe, easier to read. I also need some inspiration to attached all these chapter into a single storyline. Sorry, but it might take a very long time to have it all here.
Anonymous
5/7/18, 10:13 PM
Thank you!!!
cumguts
5/7/18, 5:59 PM
Yo, I think this might be my fave story of yours. I'd love to see more of Brett down the line. Maybe he gets bigger unexpectedly, maybe his pheromones cause bigger dicks in the dudes topping him, maybe he accidentally causes a gangbang in a public place just by dint of existing...
Anonymous
5/7/18, 4:49 PM
Rather boring. If you're going to go down the path of there being resistance, have the victims actually resist more and slowly torture them more with pleasure instead of SUDDENLY SEX. Go with things like "fully aware", "weakened" and "sensitive" before having the rest of the harem slowly break them. And go with stuff like grabbing them by the limbs, blindfolding them, or even stuff like orgasm denial for me excitement.
Anonymous
5/7/18, 1:20 PM
How about Josh gets revenge on an bully of his. Or maybe a best friend that he wanted as his boyfriend
Anonymous
5/7/18, 6:41 AM
Could you put your whole stories on here? Or tell me where you publish this stories.Amazon?
Anonymous
5/7/18, 6:18 AM
Damn this is hot!!!
Anonymous
5/7/18, 3:40 AM
Whatever you do, just do it!! The control is so hot. I'm still hard.
Anonymous
5/7/18, 3:06 AM
Not very erotic, but very well written!