Recent Comments

May 2, 2018
Kyle
5/8/18, 7:15 AM
Excellently written. Unique approach and hot as hell. Well done.
SuperHeroMan
5/8/18, 6:09 AM
Good start. Keep writing. Thanks..
Anonymous
5/8/18, 5:57 AM
A little confuesd , the cop have swaped body with bikes? There are no description about the transformation between cop and biker
david
5/8/18, 5:37 AM
It's pretty funny how Mr. Glasman turned the tables on Mike and his friends. The thought that Glasman could accomplish such a transformation in a few hours is exciting, as is the whole idea of the Mind Palace. I'd love to try it myself, though would be a lot more positive and specific than poor Mike! I'm so looking forward to reading the next chapter to see what you have in mind for Aaron's retribution and how that turns out for him.
Anonymous
5/8/18, 3:34 AM
Thanks, the new summaries are better
Anonymous
5/8/18, 3:07 AM
This is such an awesome series. Hope there will be more
Oct 2, 2006
nycboot
5/8/18, 2:34 AM
This is one of my most favorite stories on this site! I've read it so many times and it still makes me incredibly hard!
Anonymous
5/8/18, 1:57 AM
Wow, why could I not run into a ship of these aliens.
Rubberpigaz
5/8/18, 1:51 AM
What I would NOT give to have such a suit.
kk
5/8/18, 12:04 AM
pls ignore the comment above. you are doing fine with the story