Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/7/18, 6:18 AM
Damn this is hot!!!
Anonymous
5/7/18, 3:40 AM
Whatever you do, just do it!! The control is so hot. I'm still hard.
Anonymous
5/7/18, 3:06 AM
Not very erotic, but very well written!
Anonymous
5/7/18, 2:52 AM
No older brother, please. Have some other big jock from school, or a cop?
5/7/18, 2:16 AM
Disappointing there aren't more comments.
5/7/18, 1:55 AM
Would have liked more transformation but I'm greedy. At least you are finishing, something I don't always do. Would love more in this story if possible. Get over name confusion guys. Lee is now Liam as he is Irish.
5/7/18, 1:42 AM
Fantastic start, looking forward to the description of ha changes.
Anonymous
5/7/18, 1:17 AM
Please write more of Josh’s past also where is the city located where did he go to school
Anonymous
5/7/18, 1:15 AM
Explain who developed the app and how long has it existed who used it before
Anonymous
5/6/18, 11:53 PM
very well written... perhaps i'm in the minority in that I think the tf was way too subtle. It wasn't as obvious as i like it, and it was kind of an abrupt change. I felt like it was 3/4 set up and 1/4 tf. what caused the blackouts? did Jake? the pot? did Jake hypnotize or MC the main character? How much time passed between the passing out on the construction site and at the gym? I think the answers don't really matter, and are left up to the reader to interpret themselves, but I really dislike those kinds of stories... lol..