Recent Comments

TheGerman
5/6/18, 1:21 PM
Very well-written story, which has gradually unfolded, it's coherently, becoming hotter and hotter
Anonymous
5/6/18, 1:07 PM
I presume this means a professional sports team would be able to operate precisely to the coach's directions too, players would be game pieces! XD
5/6/18, 10:42 AM
The whole story is about the 70 to 80 pages. I wrote it years ago and but I needed a central idea to keep it all together. I think I found it with the publishing of this first chapter. The cops swapping body with bikers is described in another chapter. There is also the experience of a football player and 2 firefighters. I'm also planning to explain how Jake found himself at the head of this organization. It takes me a lot of time to write and review my story. I have to rewrite, reorder sections a lot of time in order to have that make sense to me and I just wanted to conclude this first chapter. I'm not ready to start a new experience series yet as I will have to find some inspiration to review and finetune the next chapter before publishing. I will see to review the first summaries. Thanks a lot for your interests and your comments.
Anonymous
5/6/18, 9:17 AM
I'm also confused..There are not description about the cop swaping body with biker.
Anonymous
5/6/18, 7:41 AM
Being recently unemployed without much prospects, this hit me hard in the feels. Very well written in so many ways. I'd take the job.
mgreene70@yahoo.com
5/6/18, 7:23 AM
This is extremely well-written and erotic. Thank you for writing it.
LongtimeFan
5/6/18, 6:59 AM
Phenomenal story! The writing is some of the best I’ve ever seen—it’s poetic, no other word for it. And the transformation/mind control aspects are so gentle and hushed that the reader doesn’t see the changes until Travis until he does. You also capture the struggle of joblessness and the question of “every man’s price” in a thoughtful way. Amazing writing, beautiful imagery, moral questions, and some of my personal kinks—in other words, a damn good story!
Anonymous
5/6/18, 6:14 AM
Bit of name confusion near the end there, bud.
Anonymous
5/6/18, 4:50 AM
Woah, this is some great writing, and super hot as well!
Anonymous
5/6/18, 3:39 AM
I'm confused.. this is the final chapter of the series and the foundational summary of the story described identically in the first three chapters hasn't really been covered at all. If the site allows it you should go back and change the descriptions so that they better describe the story actually being told ;)