Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/6/18, 9:09 PM
Incredible! Well-written and crafted. Not sure there's a sequel in this story, but to see where it goes would be nice.
Anonymous
5/6/18, 6:09 PM
Bit of name confusion in a lot of places too. Hope you get to edit! Love this story
5/6/18, 5:29 PM
"If I see a RobinHood70 story, I jack off to it." Muahahaha...the power! :P
Anonymous
5/6/18, 5:00 PM
Excellent work
Anonymous
5/6/18, 3:00 PM
Like a Fight Club-esque narrative:)
Anonymous
5/6/18, 2:28 PM
Give josh an older brother that he hadn’t seen from in a long time
TheGerman
5/6/18, 1:21 PM
Very well-written story, which has gradually unfolded, it's coherently, becoming hotter and hotter
Anonymous
5/6/18, 1:07 PM
I presume this means a professional sports team would be able to operate precisely to the coach's directions too, players would be game pieces! XD
5/6/18, 10:42 AM
The whole story is about the 70 to 80 pages. I wrote it years ago and but I needed a central idea to keep it all together. I think I found it with the publishing of this first chapter. The cops swapping body with bikers is described in another chapter. There is also the experience of a football player and 2 firefighters. I'm also planning to explain how Jake found himself at the head of this organization. It takes me a lot of time to write and review my story. I have to rewrite, reorder sections a lot of time in order to have that make sense to me and I just wanted to conclude this first chapter. I'm not ready to start a new experience series yet as I will have to find some inspiration to review and finetune the next chapter before publishing. I will see to review the first summaries. Thanks a lot for your interests and your comments.
Anonymous
5/6/18, 9:17 AM
I'm also confused..There are not description about the cop swaping body with biker.