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Anonymous
5/6/18, 10:07 PM
Yes. An older brother he had not seen for a long time. And more degrading commands.
Anonymous
5/6/18, 9:47 PM
I have no idea what happened with this story. Extremely confusing....
Anonymous
5/6/18, 9:09 PM
Incredible! Well-written and crafted. Not sure there's a sequel in this story, but to see where it goes would be nice.
Anonymous
5/6/18, 6:09 PM
Bit of name confusion in a lot of places too. Hope you get to edit! Love this story
5/6/18, 5:29 PM
"If I see a RobinHood70 story, I jack off to it." Muahahaha...the power! :P
Anonymous
5/6/18, 5:00 PM
Excellent work
Anonymous
5/6/18, 3:00 PM
Like a Fight Club-esque narrative:)
Anonymous
5/6/18, 2:28 PM
Give josh an older brother that he hadn’t seen from in a long time
TheGerman
5/6/18, 1:21 PM
Very well-written story, which has gradually unfolded, it's coherently, becoming hotter and hotter
Anonymous
5/6/18, 1:07 PM
I presume this means a professional sports team would be able to operate precisely to the coach's directions too, players would be game pieces! XD