Recent Comments

Papa Werebear
5/2/18, 4:52 AM
Well done! Really enjoyed this one.
5/2/18, 3:34 AM
Nope, it's a little later. The changeover in authors actually takes place in the middle of a paragraph--the one where the other three carry Lee back into the bedroom.
Biguycnj
5/2/18, 3:20 AM
Great collaboration you two very much enjoyed this . Taking a guess the changeover began when Lee began to undress lol
bikerbro
5/2/18, 12:37 AM
Muscled rednecks, with decent chemistry throughout. Someone's been looking at my bucket list!
Anonymous
5/2/18, 12:19 AM
this was a perfect story. good job man
Anonymous
5/1/18, 10:50 PM
Spectacular Thanks
5/1/18, 10:02 PM
Never have another worry as long as you live* The description never updates when I edit it after the fact. Colour me embarrassed
Chris Conners
5/1/18, 8:33 PM
i hope you will expand on this story next chapter. Give us more details of what changes occur to superman within the cocoon. Specifically the mind control aspect of the story. I like the suggestion above of more superheroes coming to the others' rescue. Perhaps that could be chapter 3, after superman's assimilation is complete?
Anonymous
5/1/18, 3:02 PM
I think you should read the comment left recently on the first chapter of this story.
screamingmoist
5/1/18, 2:37 PM
Thanks for reading!