Recent Comments

Max
4/30/18, 3:43 PM
That was very hot. Straight boy transformed into slutty gay stripper isn't an entirely new concept but you did the mental transformation particularly well. I love the idea of a new gay personality being overlaid on Caldin and his old one conscious and resisting as it is subordinated and then inevitably fading. The part with him looking in the mirror and addressing his former self was especially hot - it's a way of describing a mental transformation that I haven't seen much. And as always I love stories with a sinister edge and this had a great one.
AgainstMyWill
4/30/18, 2:14 PM
Yeah, wow, this was right up my alley. I especially love how you include his horrified but ineffectual resistance in there... So many stories on here once the mind control kicks in there's no more struggle, just suddenly they're cheerfully converted. I love this style so much more. And cock size shaming, musk and ass worship, feminization / sissification and just a little naughty tang of race play... Really hit the spot, thank you!! :)
Apr 27, 2018
4/30/18, 1:47 PM
Nice!
Anonymous
4/30/18, 11:13 AM
Amazing ending ! Almost thought the story will go downhill once he got his friend to get the amulet. But you kept with the humiliation . So hot. Well done. Thank you !
Anonymous
4/30/18, 10:40 AM
Hot
Apr 27, 2018
Anonymous
4/30/18, 5:26 AM
Love that reversal
Anonymous
4/30/18, 5:14 AM
It’s a nice cautionary tale for super smart nerds.
Anonymous
4/30/18, 5:13 AM
Oh, I see : )
James Bunnell
4/30/18, 5:04 AM
It's been a year where's the rest of this story, or at least chapter 9?
Willie Cici
4/30/18, 4:24 AM
Having enjoyed a recent collaboration with one of the administrators on his site, I know the pleasure that our two authors experienced from their joint effort. It came through in the writing and the story. You did a great job. It was a real pleasure to read this latest installment. Very hot!! I join in the comments made above -- more please!!!