Recent Comments

10/1/24, 5:19 PM
The story is hot, but the writing's a bit off. Phrases often feel like words are missing, and they either are too long or too shorts, pacing is the main issue.

10/1/24, 5:35 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Hi Bobby, I am happy you found my story hot.... and: like you, English is not my mother language... and I wrote that in my profile also...;-)
10/1/24, 5:27 PM
Hey, I'm missing Lex and Colt/Kelly! I can think of several different ways this can go... all exciting! Hope you get back to this story!
hairyartist
10/1/24, 1:51 PM
I love this thanks!!
10/1/24, 9:10 AM
Very cute and sexy story so far
10/1/24, 8:28 AM
Love the premise! Very dark! (Is it similar to an element of "Jessica Jones"? I haven't watched that, but have read a bit about it.) Looking forward to seeing where you go with this! A very intriguing start...
Anonymous
10/1/24, 5:06 AM
wow! what a great story. Totally captures the embarrassment and sexuality of the scene!
10/1/24, 4:14 AM
This intro is crazy good. Excited to see what’s next!
9/30/24, 10:22 PM
Welcome Back. And wow thats hot. Cant wait to read more of him adding more on his harem.

Anonymous
10/1/24, 3:32 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I'm glad you liked it. Then stay tuned, I'm just going to say that that video has a purpose 😏.
Anonymous
10/1/24, 3:19 AM
I keep coming back to this one. Love it. Love your way of writing
9/30/24, 12:04 AM
Oh man I love this. Soo good. Love the controller pov. Love the nature of the set up. So fun, hot and sexy! So very good. Looking forward to what happens next.

9/30/24, 6:47 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Right? It's like catnip to the hypno lover!

9/30/24, 11:50 PM
@[stimle](/user/show/969716) Oh yes. Very much yes. I've reread it multiple times cause the set up is so great. I especially like the pov. It's great hows it's the controller.