Recent Comments

10/1/24, 9:10 AM
Very cute and sexy story so far
10/1/24, 8:28 AM
Love the premise! Very dark! (Is it similar to an element of "Jessica Jones"? I haven't watched that, but have read a bit about it.) Looking forward to seeing where you go with this! A very intriguing start...
Anonymous
10/1/24, 5:06 AM
wow! what a great story. Totally captures the embarrassment and sexuality of the scene!
10/1/24, 4:14 AM
This intro is crazy good. Excited to see what’s next!
9/30/24, 10:22 PM
Welcome Back. And wow thats hot. Cant wait to read more of him adding more on his harem.

Anonymous
10/1/24, 3:32 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I'm glad you liked it. Then stay tuned, I'm just going to say that that video has a purpose 😏.
Anonymous
10/1/24, 3:19 AM
I keep coming back to this one. Love it. Love your way of writing
9/30/24, 12:04 AM
Oh man I love this. Soo good. Love the controller pov. Love the nature of the set up. So fun, hot and sexy! So very good. Looking forward to what happens next.

9/30/24, 6:47 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Right? It's like catnip to the hypno lover!

9/30/24, 11:50 PM
@[stimle](/user/show/969716) Oh yes. Very much yes. I've reread it multiple times cause the set up is so great. I especially like the pov. It's great hows it's the controller.
9/29/24, 3:45 AM
So great to see you back. Would love it if this continued or even if you wrote something else... Just anything you write will be great

9/30/24, 10:54 PM
@[HusbandFirst](/user/show/2436468) Thanks so much for your comment and continued support! It's very much appreciated!
9/30/24, 10:06 PM
Immediately one of my favorites
9/30/24, 8:56 PM
reading through it again I noticed a few more things 1) The prompt has a typo, "breathrough", but this ends up being a "good" point because the AI clearly figures out what I meant to say as it references "breakthrough" later 2) I think my bad #3 was wrong.. The AI didn't miss it, it just decided to strongly imply it rather than doing any direct coverage of it, because Azrael "stops and looks up" and later "stands up" so my initial reading that he was actually standing at the foot of the bed was clearly the wrong interpretation. Although I would do a different bad #3 about how irritating it is that the model chooses an implied approach, thus making for a worse story.