Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/27/18, 2:05 PM
Extremely sad to have finished this story. It hit all my buttons so well. Great work to the author! Sad to see they've produced nothing since this story on here.
Anonymous
4/27/18, 1:51 PM
Made me hard!!!!
Anonymous
4/27/18, 1:43 PM
Precursor story would work, as well as a sequel that you have in mind, with the father/brother etc. I'm sure they will be as good as this story was hot.
Anonymous
4/27/18, 1:38 PM
Incredible! Loved this story and the plot twists.
Anonymous
4/27/18, 12:36 PM
hot
4/27/18, 12:30 PM
I agree with Hypnothrill. It's best not to know what happened to the mother or the other women. There is definitely dark tones here that it's best to gloss over them, and let the reader fill in the blanks. This is supposed to be an erotic story. But if you demand the writer to explain all the details, then you risk it becoming more horror than erotic.
Anonymous
4/27/18, 12:23 PM
Why don’t you show how the virus started
LongtimeFan
4/27/18, 11:35 AM
WOW! This is an incredibly hot story! It has all of my favorites—guys transforming into muscleheaded, perfect, empty-brained bros obsessed with sex. Plus the writing is top-notch; you do a great job capturing the changed world and (my favorite) Rozz’s mental transformation from individual to permanently horny bro. Great job!
4/27/18, 10:04 AM
I intentionally left that part vague, so that readers could draw their own conclusions. But I'll tell you that I had something pretty dark in mind. Parents will sometimes tell their children that a beloved pet "went to live in the country" when that pet dies. The line about Dillon's mother is similarly euphemistic, just like this line about Wes: "“No, the basement is better,” Mr. Meyer said firmly, “There he can rest in peace.”"
Anonymous
4/27/18, 9:38 AM
Too bad it's the end. I would have enjoyed the Governor bursting in and shouting in horror "Son, NO! Before the skin has settled, you shouldn't even TOUCH them!" ;-)