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4/27/18, 10:04 AM
I intentionally left that part vague, so that readers could draw their own conclusions. But I'll tell you that I had something pretty dark in mind. Parents will sometimes tell their children that a beloved pet "went to live in the country" when that pet dies. The line about Dillon's mother is similarly euphemistic, just like this line about Wes: "“No, the basement is better,” Mr. Meyer said firmly, “There he can rest in peace.”"
Anonymous
4/27/18, 9:38 AM
Too bad it's the end. I would have enjoyed the Governor bursting in and shouting in horror "Son, NO! Before the skin has settled, you shouldn't even TOUCH them!" ;-)
Anonymous
4/27/18, 7:44 AM
As usual excellent writing. However since you insist on never describing your characters and instead use pictures to show what they look like, you actually take away from the flow of the story. Especially when the link to Bobby's picture no longer exists. For these kind of reasons you really should take the extra initiative to describe in detail what each guy in your stories look like, as other writters on here do for their own stories. For if you keep just using these picture links which you don't have rights to as an easy way to avoid having to put effort into describing the characters; then your stories will continue to disappoint and lose their appeal, especially when the links disappear or become invaild as the one for Bobby did. This criticism may seem harsh but you used to be a much better writer when you didn't use the picture links; for I personally I've been reading you for numerous years now. So I feel this criticism is a long time coming and somebody had to say it.
Anonymous
4/27/18, 7:12 AM
Wonderful i hope he makes dick humiliate himself in front of his friends or just in general makes him humiliate himself like cleaning Erics apartment in his underwear making him lick his toilet clean.
Anonymous
4/27/18, 6:15 AM
Loved the first three chapters and can’t wait to see what happens in the next one. Just one question (pure curiosity) what happened to Dillon’s mother?
4/27/18, 6:11 AM
Alan and his dad the governor should be made into drones. Did Sam's dad basically sell himself into slavery to help his son? If so it was a complete waste of his life and his son's.
Anonymous
4/27/18, 5:35 AM
Ehhh!
Anonymous
4/27/18, 5:34 AM
Excellent!!
Anonymous
4/27/18, 4:19 AM
Fantastic story. Was able to come back to it multiple times thanks to the length. Really great work.
4/27/18, 4:15 AM
Sadly, I think it's the end for this series. We need Alan to keep the secret of the robots. However, if any man comes close to discovering the truth, I'm sure Alan will find a way to fix the problem.