Recent Comments

9/30/24, 3:08 PM
What an interesting Chapter. Not only do we get a new player with the addition of David but it also looks like the contract has some draw backs finally being revealed. I thought at first anyone was able to drain and or give Conner cock size but it looks like if it's not with Kyle then Conner gets his size back? It looks like things are going to change as Kyle will probably won't want that happening as shown at the end. But when of if Conner tells Kyle what happens I wonder how he will react? Become more possessive of Conner? Ruin any chance with David if there was any? Will Kyle have to kick the draining up a notch after loosing almost an inch? Excited to see where things go from here! Thanks for continuing such a great story!
9/30/24, 2:03 PM
Can't wait to see the next chapters!!!:hot_face:
9/28/24, 11:01 PM
Loved this one! Seeing the big muscle guy getting turned into a submissive bottoms is the best! Even better that he is caged. I hope it doesn't come off. There is so much more for this newly discovered 'boy' to discover and learn.

9/30/24, 1:00 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thanks, man. I'm glad you enjoyed it. We'll see where things go from here.
9/30/24, 9:50 AM
Loved this! Would love to see the next chapter where luckys new friends get ensnared :)
9/30/24, 9:46 AM
Cant wait for the sequels and spin-offs! The 12th Night, the 87th Garrison :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
9/30/24, 6:33 AM
Seems like the author has left the site. A lot of good writers start a series, get writers block. And just stop. They don’t leave a comment about stopping the story or anything.
9/29/24, 2:46 PM
Oh goodness... this story is SO GOOD! I love how sassy the boys are and sexy the hypnotist is. I love this story. THANK YOU. What is going to happen and when did the hypnotist have some selfish experience with these men? I cannot wait to learn about it.

9/30/24, 6:26 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank you so much! Chapter 3 awaits you...
2/27/24, 4:44 AM
Your story’s push all the right buttons for me they’re absolutely perfect. I’d love to see more or even a part 2

9/30/24, 5:36 AM
@[Hubert](/user/show/10026700) Update: I will literally pay you for a part 2. The Eternal Twilight series is no joke the hottest thing I've ever read.
Anonymous
9/30/24, 2:59 AM
“…or I don’t know man my cum went all over him.” is the line that sent me over the edge! You rode the line of sexy and silly so well for me :fire:
Anonymous
9/30/24, 1:50 AM
Needs more. Like the hypnosis part and the aftermath