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Apr 25, 2018
Anonymous
4/26/18, 9:20 PM
This was just really weird
Anonymous
4/26/18, 9:15 PM
Please continue this. More extreme humilation for the bully. I like the way you write the mind controlling. :)
Anonymous
4/26/18, 7:57 PM
I feel so sad for Alan. Can’t he join Sam?
Anonymous
4/26/18, 7:56 PM
Very good start! Loved it!
Anonymous
4/26/18, 3:58 PM
Love your stories! I always look out for your stories to read!
Anonymous
4/26/18, 3:18 PM
Excellent, but dark!
4/26/18, 3:05 PM
Great story.. This should be a series
Anonymous
4/26/18, 2:36 PM
Interesting and hot ! what is Johnathan to do now ?
codypony@aol.com
4/26/18, 2:35 PM
Personally, i loved the scene and narrative perspective twist between chapter 2 and 3. Very unexpected, clearly showing that you had thought things out to an end point. Something that the best writers do before they begin, before they get stuck with the question, How am i going to finish this stupid thing? I will be saving and returning to this one many time in future! And as with you, Sam and Dad need no 'fixing'. I too am envious! I like your idea.... Let your penis be your editor! Actually in that respect, i am your puppet brother.....
Anonymous
4/26/18, 2:32 PM
Hot!!!!