I would love to hear if you had an idea of where the human components went, obviously use up in some way such that the suit itself survives to be reused. Did you have an arc in mind or have you thought of one since? cody

You had a flood tide of great ideas here and skillfully navigated through them. I loved the new look you gave to the hero. The mind control was clever, as was his training. Best of all, you left him in an absolutely awful and inescapable fix.

Great story, I love the feminization of Batman, I would love something similar with spiderman

I want to thank everyone for the kind feedback. I was a little worried after I posted that first chapter. Some of the feedback wasn't quite what I expected. But I can't always expect favorable responses. I have to be willing to take the criticism too. It only made me double-down and try to make the story exceptional. I figured if I get myself hard, then it should have the same effect on others. I would't feel too sorry for Sam. He got exactly what he wanted. He gets to be with his father. His only mistake was the idea of trying to "fix" his father. As far as I'm concerned, becoming and living as a sex drone is not to be fixed. I don't feel sorry for the life Sam and Ben live. I envy it. The person I feel sorry for is Alan. Sure ... he's a bit of a douche. But I can't worry about people like them. Hopefully, in due time, he'll get his just desserts. But I don't envy him. I envy the drones. I think there's something to be said about living a blissful life, connected to your brothers through a hive-mentality and being encapsulated in a living rubber. And as for Null0Byte .. I'll be sending you an email. And if anyone ever feels up to having a discussion with me, please feel free to do so. My email is jacketrat@hotmail.com ... My first name is Nathan. What I've enjoyed most about posting my stories is the connections I've made. I've learned over the years that there are many of you that share in the same fantasies that I write about. When I first started, I thought I was the rare exception. But over the years, more and more of you comment about how much you enjoyed what I wrote, and that you had the same urges and ideas that I have. It bridges a connection between us. And I always enjoy hearing about you got off, what you liked and what sweet spots I may have hit. We may not exist with a literal hive-mentality, but by sharing these stories, expressing comments and talking ... it does bring us all a little closer together. I sincerely thank the existence of this website that allows me to post my stories, and have guys like you, read and comment on them.

have always had a thing for The Joker overpowering Batman - well done!

Tho I wish you add more older men controlled, I'm loving this series!

Aww, thanks nycboot! Despite it not being your fetish, I appreciate you taking the time to read it, and really appreciate your kind words. Cheers!

i agree with the others. terrific story.

our systems are humming with cascading synchronized gratification

Wow. I am a boot obsessive but I'm totally not into feet. Yet your writing was so wonderful and enticing. I totally understood your headspace and your crazily insane foot obsession. Can't say my cock got hard, but by the end I was identifying with the character's salivations. Lovely story!