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Apr 20, 2018
4/25/18, 3:16 PM
That was quite a workout. I can envision the former alpha being put through all sorts of scenes. Spitting into his mouth certainly proved his submissive status.
Null0byte
4/25/18, 2:42 PM
UGH. "I'll just say I wish I both wish..." Should have been: "I'll just say I both wish..."
Null0byte
4/25/18, 2:40 PM
I've always enjoyed your stories. They made me feel a multitude of emotions over the course of the various story arcs. You're an exceptionally good writer, one of my favorite along with Retho so far, and this one is no exception in your skill. But this one however, I....... I'll just say I wish I both wish I ended up in that suit myself (for other reasons), and that I could throttle that arrogant little asshole to the moon. If anyone wishes to engage/discuss anything/everything/whatever with me (not limiting to just this story or site), or for story editing help, my email address is lostnsearching79@gmail.com (And, yes this does include you too, Mr. Rubbrsome. I absolutely adore your stories, but even after all this time, you do still tend to get names/references a bit off in places. Like most other stories I read, unless asked to edit them, I mentally edit them as I go for readability sake, but I also do take note it exists)
Anonymous
4/25/18, 2:37 PM
I can appreciate the difficulty of communicating in a language not your primary tongue. PLEASE take the time to run a Spell Check and Grammar. Let the computer help you with your difficulties. Plus, read some of the stories on this site to get a sense of form. For example, when people are speaking, quotation marks are used to denote what the character is saying. Other than that, story was interesting and promising.
sixdead106
4/25/18, 12:43 PM
You are by far my favorite writer ! I'm coming every day for new stories from you !
4/25/18, 12:02 PM
Now we know why the retention is 100% >..>
Anonymous
4/25/18, 10:38 AM
Very hot. Please continue
Anonymous
4/25/18, 10:34 AM
Damn! This is way too hot!
Boon
4/25/18, 10:16 AM
Hi! This was very intersting and promising! It is really your first story? It's quite good! I'd love to read the next chapter!
Dec 30, 2006
Anonymous
4/25/18, 7:22 AM
Nice