Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/25/18, 2:37 PM
I can appreciate the difficulty of communicating in a language not your primary tongue. PLEASE take the time to run a Spell Check and Grammar. Let the computer help you with your difficulties. Plus, read some of the stories on this site to get a sense of form. For example, when people are speaking, quotation marks are used to denote what the character is saying. Other than that, story was interesting and promising.
sixdead106
4/25/18, 12:43 PM
You are by far my favorite writer ! I'm coming every day for new stories from you !
4/25/18, 12:02 PM
Now we know why the retention is 100% >..>
Anonymous
4/25/18, 10:38 AM
Very hot. Please continue
Anonymous
4/25/18, 10:34 AM
Damn! This is way too hot!
Boon
4/25/18, 10:16 AM
Hi! This was very intersting and promising! It is really your first story? It's quite good! I'd love to read the next chapter!
Dec 30, 2006
Anonymous
4/25/18, 7:22 AM
Nice
Anonymous
4/25/18, 4:25 AM
Interesting! I liked how you told it from both sides.
Anonymous
4/25/18, 3:50 AM
interesting, did Ben lure Sam to Alan or is it a fateful twist ?
Apr 24, 2018
D
4/25/18, 12:25 AM
Love it bro. But not in a gay way, y’know? Good to see a couple guys figuring how to be better bros for eachother