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HeroLuver
4/21/18, 2:00 PM
Awesome beginning.
Apr 20, 2018
Anonymous
4/21/18, 12:31 PM
Great story
TheGerman
4/21/18, 11:01 AM
I'm not a fan of piss. But there were a few more points that interested me to take a look into the story. I've choiced well. I liked the description of the chat in the first part, which wasn't just so briefly hinted at. Only the description of Duke's anesthesia I would have wished in more detail, because such descriptions are turning me on. In the second part, you notice from the beginning Duke's hopelessness to be at the mercy of his abductor. And the impression of the reinforcement by the consistent, stringent measures to enslave him lets the arousment rise. At the thought of what dominance crushes him, without having a chance to escape, I've become pretty hard....
F U
4/21/18, 9:35 AM
This Suks
Rocko
4/21/18, 8:27 AM
Sweeeeeet, bro! I LOVE IT! And not only because I'm totally baked and high as a kite, hehehehe I think it's quite good and hot, and reading it was a great way to celebrate 4:20. If you plan to make a third chapter, would be hot if Jer (or other new nerdy guy) becomes into a blatant pothead. You know, the king of guy who wears green t shirts with stoner motifs, big belt buckles with weed leafs, yin - yang bandanas and stuff like that. I recently saw a pair of rocker boots with green pot leafs that looks totally hot. Would be interesting if you add more variety to your characters!
LongtimeFan
4/21/18, 8:00 AM
Another winner! Love the descriptions of the characters, the implication that the weed is spreading across campus (mmm...an entire college of hot stoner guys...niiiiice), and the showcase of the mental transformation. You’re an excellent writer! :)
Anonymous
4/21/18, 7:29 AM
I really wish there were some sort of sequel to this
Anonymous
4/21/18, 5:26 AM
Oh, fuck. So hot
The_Supernatural_D
4/21/18, 4:32 AM
The story is on bit bit TOO slow of a burn, but I appreciate that you took the time to tell an actual story. Also, I'm not a huge fan of how sinister it is. And there were some typos here and there, nothing major but enough to break immersion. All in all, I enjoyed the read and am looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters.
Anonymous
4/21/18, 2:24 AM
If you had a chance to write a sequel or spin off, wish you could do a story featuring a college newspaper investigating these stoner bros and ending up finding Reece (and they were also trapped). Anyway, another awesome story.