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Throne
4/20/18, 7:38 PM
You brought this to a satisfying conclusion. Really gave it to us in the end... so to speak. I can relate to you wanting to focus on the transformation rather than the aftermath. I've done the same in some of my stories.
Throne
4/20/18, 6:20 PM
Well worth the previous wait to see the curse now accelerating its effects. It's appropriate that the guys' continuing homophobia is what caused their changes to speed up.
Anonymous
4/20/18, 5:44 PM
Super hot! Love the slow corruption :)
Max
4/20/18, 2:08 PM
I liked this a lot! Liked the subtle reprogramming and how sinister Barry is, and how Martin is aware of how he has been altered but is utterly unable to do anything about it - the more he resists, the more his programming will be reinforced, and Martin actually instructs him to resist. I don't think I've ever seen that angle in a story and it's hot as hell. I see possibilities for future chapters documenting Martin's further degradation. He might come to enjoy this business decision. ;-)
TheGerman
4/20/18, 8:54 AM
Written solid, limited to the essentials. Personally, I prefer more detailed stories, but in the short time here, I've noticed that stories which are keeping short often going down well. So you did a lot of things right.
Anonymous
4/20/18, 7:22 AM
So good.I can't wait for the next part
Anonymous
4/20/18, 6:21 AM
Love me a good sexy dumb stoner musclehead jock story
Boon
4/20/18, 6:02 AM
Excellent! I love stories with cops that put some time to describe their uniforms and the loss of authority when they are robbed of it. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!!!
Anonymous
4/20/18, 5:50 AM
Ameizing!!! Pleas continúe
Apr 19, 2018
LongtimeFan
4/20/18, 4:21 AM
AMAZING! The pictures are all incredible, the thought of these guys at the gym was phenomenal (why, why, WHY does no one like that work out at my gym?) :p, and I loved the ending, too. Great going! :D