Recent Comments

Rocko
4/21/18, 8:27 AM
Sweeeeeet, bro! I LOVE IT! And not only because I'm totally baked and high as a kite, hehehehe I think it's quite good and hot, and reading it was a great way to celebrate 4:20. If you plan to make a third chapter, would be hot if Jer (or other new nerdy guy) becomes into a blatant pothead. You know, the king of guy who wears green t shirts with stoner motifs, big belt buckles with weed leafs, yin - yang bandanas and stuff like that. I recently saw a pair of rocker boots with green pot leafs that looks totally hot. Would be interesting if you add more variety to your characters!
LongtimeFan
4/21/18, 8:00 AM
Another winner! Love the descriptions of the characters, the implication that the weed is spreading across campus (mmm...an entire college of hot stoner guys...niiiiice), and the showcase of the mental transformation. You’re an excellent writer! :)
Anonymous
4/21/18, 7:29 AM
I really wish there were some sort of sequel to this
Anonymous
4/21/18, 5:26 AM
Oh, fuck. So hot
The_Supernatural_D
4/21/18, 4:32 AM
The story is on bit bit TOO slow of a burn, but I appreciate that you took the time to tell an actual story. Also, I'm not a huge fan of how sinister it is. And there were some typos here and there, nothing major but enough to break immersion. All in all, I enjoyed the read and am looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters.
Anonymous
4/21/18, 2:24 AM
If you had a chance to write a sequel or spin off, wish you could do a story featuring a college newspaper investigating these stoner bros and ending up finding Reece (and they were also trapped). Anyway, another awesome story.
Anonymous
4/21/18, 1:45 AM
Love new Mark. Hope Jer is also a likable too. So nice you added some descriptions.
Anonymous
4/21/18, 1:30 AM
Great!! Hope pods wisely spread until given a name : ) we’ll see more stories and more jock xoxo
Anonymous
4/21/18, 1:24 AM
It would have been much greater if it had ended with Mark introducing Jer to Reece and showing us Jer after transformation. It was, however, so hot to learn more bout two bros’ former life and a 180 that Jer showed. I saw some improvements both in grammar and style keep it up!!
Anonymous
4/21/18, 12:57 AM
Thank you, bro. And, great to see the improvement!! It was a lot easier to read.