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Anonymous
4/20/18, 10:55 PM
Arrogance rewarded. Love these stories!!
Apr 19, 2018
Anonymous
4/20/18, 10:45 PM
Excellent!
Anonymous
4/20/18, 8:20 PM
Same,I want more tooooo!
Throne
4/20/18, 8:02 PM
You totally swept us along during that shattering experience. Powerful ending with Noel concerned about when he'll get more, and not with losing his GF.
Throne
4/20/18, 7:38 PM
You brought this to a satisfying conclusion. Really gave it to us in the end... so to speak. I can relate to you wanting to focus on the transformation rather than the aftermath. I've done the same in some of my stories.
Throne
4/20/18, 6:20 PM
Well worth the previous wait to see the curse now accelerating its effects. It's appropriate that the guys' continuing homophobia is what caused their changes to speed up.
Anonymous
4/20/18, 5:44 PM
Super hot! Love the slow corruption :)
Max
4/20/18, 2:08 PM
I liked this a lot! Liked the subtle reprogramming and how sinister Barry is, and how Martin is aware of how he has been altered but is utterly unable to do anything about it - the more he resists, the more his programming will be reinforced, and Martin actually instructs him to resist. I don't think I've ever seen that angle in a story and it's hot as hell. I see possibilities for future chapters documenting Martin's further degradation. He might come to enjoy this business decision. ;-)
TheGerman
4/20/18, 8:54 AM
Written solid, limited to the essentials. Personally, I prefer more detailed stories, but in the short time here, I've noticed that stories which are keeping short often going down well. So you did a lot of things right.
Anonymous
4/20/18, 7:22 AM
So good.I can't wait for the next part