Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/21/18, 7:29 AM
I really wish there were some sort of sequel to this
Anonymous
4/21/18, 5:26 AM
Oh, fuck. So hot
The_Supernatural_D
4/21/18, 4:32 AM
The story is on bit bit TOO slow of a burn, but I appreciate that you took the time to tell an actual story. Also, I'm not a huge fan of how sinister it is. And there were some typos here and there, nothing major but enough to break immersion. All in all, I enjoyed the read and am looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters.
Anonymous
4/21/18, 2:24 AM
If you had a chance to write a sequel or spin off, wish you could do a story featuring a college newspaper investigating these stoner bros and ending up finding Reece (and they were also trapped). Anyway, another awesome story.
Anonymous
4/21/18, 1:45 AM
Love new Mark. Hope Jer is also a likable too. So nice you added some descriptions.
Anonymous
4/21/18, 1:30 AM
Great!! Hope pods wisely spread until given a name : ) we’ll see more stories and more jock xoxo
Anonymous
4/21/18, 1:24 AM
It would have been much greater if it had ended with Mark introducing Jer to Reece and showing us Jer after transformation. It was, however, so hot to learn more bout two bros’ former life and a 180 that Jer showed. I saw some improvements both in grammar and style keep it up!!
Anonymous
4/21/18, 12:57 AM
Thank you, bro. And, great to see the improvement!! It was a lot easier to read.
Anonymous
4/21/18, 12:55 AM
Love new jer and he should gain another football scholarship too!! Hope you continue this story and let us know more about Reece and how he works with Coach and football team, while bringing more students into the circle of bros. I suppose the locker room smelled quite nicely. Hehehe
4/20/18, 11:25 PM
You developed this perfectly, using Martin's attitude to advance the story. And you left it wonderfully open-ended!