Recent Comments

LongtimeFan
4/19/18, 1:15 PM
Amazing first story! Guys getting all potted out, slow-minded, and lazy is one of my biggest turn-ons, and we don’t see enough of it here. Welcome to the community! Can’t wait to see what you do next. :)
Arsenal
4/19/18, 12:38 PM
WOW! Superheroes and tentacles. My two favorite subjects. Very hot. I hope there will be another chapter. After Superman assimilated, he could help assimilate more superheroes (Captain Marvel, Nightwing, The Boy Wonder, Cyborg, etc.) Or maybe some Marvel superheroes like Captain America, Bucky, Spiderman, Hulk ....
TonyBoy
4/19/18, 11:24 AM
LOVED this story! PLEASE continue!!!
Anonymous
4/19/18, 11:13 AM
Can I get some of this weed, please? I'm asking for a friend...
Anonymous
4/19/18, 10:45 AM
i would let jake put his cock up my ass and let him cum inside of me
Anonymous
4/19/18, 9:25 AM
Terrific
4/19/18, 8:19 AM
Really good for a first story! One suggestion: Start a new paragraph after each bit of dialogue, so that the dialogue is easier to read.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
4/19/18, 5:51 AM
Sweet widdle baby! Would love to be tranced like this!
Anonymous
4/19/18, 4:25 AM
Phew. Just the 1st episode and i actually almost cummed! Cant wait for the next!
4/19/18, 4:00 AM
Tommy's transformation was a bit uneventful and short. No resistance. Mike on the other hand was hot! Great job with the preventing escape. We have all read bondage and immobility, but lost, confused and unable to find your way out while the thing(s) you are trying to escape appear around every corner. I also like the dichotomy of the twinks versus Bulls. Mike's first cock scene made me just want a thick hairy Bull cock in front of me and go to town. As for the reason for the Labyrinth and the people behind it. I don't think there always needs to be explanation. The transformations are the hot part and the mind can go wherever it wants. Sometimes when the person or thing is revealed, it lends a disappointment if that's not a turn on for you. When I wrote The Submarine, I intentionally made the Enslaving force unexplained. It seems to have worked well from the comments, although one or two did comment about who or what the enslaving force was.