Recent Comments

4/19/18, 4:00 AM
Tommy's transformation was a bit uneventful and short. No resistance. Mike on the other hand was hot! Great job with the preventing escape. We have all read bondage and immobility, but lost, confused and unable to find your way out while the thing(s) you are trying to escape appear around every corner. I also like the dichotomy of the twinks versus Bulls. Mike's first cock scene made me just want a thick hairy Bull cock in front of me and go to town. As for the reason for the Labyrinth and the people behind it. I don't think there always needs to be explanation. The transformations are the hot part and the mind can go wherever it wants. Sometimes when the person or thing is revealed, it lends a disappointment if that's not a turn on for you. When I wrote The Submarine, I intentionally made the Enslaving force unexplained. It seems to have worked well from the comments, although one or two did comment about who or what the enslaving force was.
Anonymous
4/19/18, 2:26 AM
very interesting
Apr 18, 2018
Biguynj
4/19/18, 2:25 AM
Interesting not sure if I want them to get back to real life or not
Throne
4/19/18, 1:56 AM
I'm enjoying the contrasting transformations. That brief hair check near the end was perfect.
Throne
4/19/18, 1:52 AM
I like how subtly and unhurriedly you're introducing changes in these two.
Throne
4/19/18, 1:50 AM
Good introduction of the characters and situation. Made me want to read more.
Bimarguynj
4/19/18, 12:18 AM
Loved this lol. I see dad calling mr rite out and calls the police . Mr rite shows up with brown bottle ,let the fun begin
Anonymous
4/18/18, 10:19 PM
I need more of your stories.
rubberpig
4/18/18, 9:32 PM
Very very hot. Can't wait for more. And yeah work on the editing over time, but don't let that stop you from posting.
blufman1
4/18/18, 9:22 PM
Brilliant as always