Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/19/18, 10:45 AM
i would let jake put his cock up my ass and let him cum inside of me
Anonymous
4/19/18, 9:25 AM
Terrific
4/19/18, 8:19 AM
Really good for a first story! One suggestion: Start a new paragraph after each bit of dialogue, so that the dialogue is easier to read.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
4/19/18, 5:51 AM
Sweet widdle baby! Would love to be tranced like this!
Anonymous
4/19/18, 4:25 AM
Phew. Just the 1st episode and i actually almost cummed! Cant wait for the next!
4/19/18, 4:00 AM
Tommy's transformation was a bit uneventful and short. No resistance. Mike on the other hand was hot! Great job with the preventing escape. We have all read bondage and immobility, but lost, confused and unable to find your way out while the thing(s) you are trying to escape appear around every corner. I also like the dichotomy of the twinks versus Bulls. Mike's first cock scene made me just want a thick hairy Bull cock in front of me and go to town. As for the reason for the Labyrinth and the people behind it. I don't think there always needs to be explanation. The transformations are the hot part and the mind can go wherever it wants. Sometimes when the person or thing is revealed, it lends a disappointment if that's not a turn on for you. When I wrote The Submarine, I intentionally made the Enslaving force unexplained. It seems to have worked well from the comments, although one or two did comment about who or what the enslaving force was.
Anonymous
4/19/18, 2:26 AM
very interesting
Apr 18, 2018
Biguynj
4/19/18, 2:25 AM
Interesting not sure if I want them to get back to real life or not
Throne
4/19/18, 1:56 AM
I'm enjoying the contrasting transformations. That brief hair check near the end was perfect.
Throne
4/19/18, 1:52 AM
I like how subtly and unhurriedly you're introducing changes in these two.