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9/29/24, 3:45 AM
So great to see you back. Would love it if this continued or even if you wrote something else... Just anything you write will be great

9/30/24, 10:54 PM
@[HusbandFirst](/user/show/2436468) Thanks so much for your comment and continued support! It's very much appreciated!
9/30/24, 10:06 PM
Immediately one of my favorites
9/30/24, 8:56 PM
reading through it again I noticed a few more things 1) The prompt has a typo, "breathrough", but this ends up being a "good" point because the AI clearly figures out what I meant to say as it references "breakthrough" later 2) I think my bad #3 was wrong.. The AI didn't miss it, it just decided to strongly imply it rather than doing any direct coverage of it, because Azrael "stops and looks up" and later "stands up" so my initial reading that he was actually standing at the foot of the bed was clearly the wrong interpretation. Although I would do a different bad #3 about how irritating it is that the model chooses an implied approach, thus making for a worse story.
9/30/24, 7:21 PM
Super excited by this intro! Can't wait to see some long steamy descriptions of sex under hypno, cause every other element of an all-time favorite is already here. Thanks for sharing.
9/30/24, 6:44 PM
So hot :hot_face: Couldn't help myself reading this. Love the realistic descriptions of his flickering consciousness, the power of the hypnotist, and Jesse's mixed emotions about the inevitable surrender. Going to be rereading this...
9/30/24, 6:26 PM
Incredible. This story could be an epic with so many deviations like lord-of-the-rings sort of thing! Hot. Thanks
9/30/24, 4:35 PM
Now that Colt has turned Hunter around, we need to hear about how Hunter can make it up to him! Aiden could certainly show Colt what a true friend he has always been. This is a controlled party we want to see, dude! All of Colt's devoted fans should be witnesses to his powers and action.
9/30/24, 3:44 PM
You have this wonderful ability to mix the outright bizarre and the utterly wholesome. I always look forward to reading a new cockatrice story :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
9/30/24, 3:08 PM
What an interesting Chapter. Not only do we get a new player with the addition of David but it also looks like the contract has some draw backs finally being revealed. I thought at first anyone was able to drain and or give Conner cock size but it looks like if it's not with Kyle then Conner gets his size back? It looks like things are going to change as Kyle will probably won't want that happening as shown at the end. But when of if Conner tells Kyle what happens I wonder how he will react? Become more possessive of Conner? Ruin any chance with David if there was any? Will Kyle have to kick the draining up a notch after loosing almost an inch? Excited to see where things go from here! Thanks for continuing such a great story!
9/30/24, 2:03 PM
Can't wait to see the next chapters!!!:hot_face: