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rubberpig
4/18/18, 9:07 PM
more. please!
Anonymous
4/18/18, 6:34 PM
PLEASE let the dad join in!
LongtimeFan
4/18/18, 6:10 PM
Great story! No one does this kind of story like you, rubbrsome. Like my favorite Hypnothrill (no offense!—rubber and drones just aren’t my kink), you spend lots of time on mental changes and building your characters, which I always appreciate. Plus that “100% retention rate” line is nice and ominous...what will happen?
TheGerman
4/18/18, 5:37 PM
That you can write well about sex scenes, you have proven. Maybe you build a story around it too. No matter - if you continue with a real plot or in the same style - both would have its charm.
LongtimeFan
4/18/18, 3:16 PM
HOT DAMN! This is an AMAZING story. Love the contrast between Tommy’s instant acceptance and Mike’s gradual hypnosis. God, I’m hard. :p And as for a backstory, I like the mystical, dreamy side of things. Since this tale is based on Greek myth, maybe it’s some kind of otherworldly power—like the gods Pan or Bacchus, luring young twinks and virile bulls to a life of debauchery and sex. Mmmm.
Max
4/18/18, 2:44 PM
I agree it's hard to come up with descriptions for how these kind of gay mind control conspiracies function and it's probably not necessary to try too hard unless it's part of the story. But I still would love to see a part 3 about the older roommate, maybe from his perspective. Maybe Johnny returns to seduce him (I love a bottom seducing a top) and maybe he brings along newly twinkified Tommy and Mike - 3 twinks worshipping a newly converted Bull could be hot. Maybe his programming allows him more awareness than the twinks? I don't know, I just think the concept definitely has more possibilities if you ever want to continue it.
4/18/18, 2:33 PM
Yay! A new Rubbrsome story! I hope we get more installments, because I'd love to get more depictions of Ben and Dean's mental conversion.
4/18/18, 2:28 PM
I wish I could have found a way to return to the older roommate, but it would have broken the flow and intensity of the story. Usually, when I write this particular kind of brainwashing conspiracy story, I try to figure out some kind of business plan for the brainwashing conspiracy (as I do in "Scrubbed Clean" and "International Colors" and "Bolshoi Papa"). But here I just couldn't figure out exactly what the Labyrinth's business plan might be, so I just tried to make it more dreamlike and mythic. If YOU can figure out a good backstory for who's behind the Labyrinth and how it functions, please let me know!
Anonymous
4/18/18, 2:24 PM
This needs to continue.
Anonymous
4/18/18, 2:21 PM
Where is this going?? I gotta know.