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rubberpig
4/18/18, 9:32 PM
Very very hot. Can't wait for more. And yeah work on the editing over time, but don't let that stop you from posting.
blufman1
4/18/18, 9:22 PM
Brilliant as always
tomozco
4/18/18, 9:10 PM
Very hot as usual, Hypnothrill! I first thought that the plan was these twinks would be serving as sex toys in a secretive bathhouse, but then the Bulls come in as tops, who are also apparently brainwashed too! I guess this makes the Labyrinth a mysterious, almost mythical as you said, sex heaven with a secret ultimate Boss! There are definitely many possibilities as to the actual background of this place...hope you'll come up with some ideas to carry this on. If not, I'm always looking forward to reading more new stories of yours! Keep it up!!! ;)
rubberpig
4/18/18, 9:07 PM
more. please!
Anonymous
4/18/18, 6:34 PM
PLEASE let the dad join in!
LongtimeFan
4/18/18, 6:10 PM
Great story! No one does this kind of story like you, rubbrsome. Like my favorite Hypnothrill (no offense!—rubber and drones just aren’t my kink), you spend lots of time on mental changes and building your characters, which I always appreciate. Plus that “100% retention rate” line is nice and ominous...what will happen?
TheGerman
4/18/18, 5:37 PM
That you can write well about sex scenes, you have proven. Maybe you build a story around it too. No matter - if you continue with a real plot or in the same style - both would have its charm.
LongtimeFan
4/18/18, 3:16 PM
HOT DAMN! This is an AMAZING story. Love the contrast between Tommy’s instant acceptance and Mike’s gradual hypnosis. God, I’m hard. :p And as for a backstory, I like the mystical, dreamy side of things. Since this tale is based on Greek myth, maybe it’s some kind of otherworldly power—like the gods Pan or Bacchus, luring young twinks and virile bulls to a life of debauchery and sex. Mmmm.
Max
4/18/18, 2:44 PM
I agree it's hard to come up with descriptions for how these kind of gay mind control conspiracies function and it's probably not necessary to try too hard unless it's part of the story. But I still would love to see a part 3 about the older roommate, maybe from his perspective. Maybe Johnny returns to seduce him (I love a bottom seducing a top) and maybe he brings along newly twinkified Tommy and Mike - 3 twinks worshipping a newly converted Bull could be hot. Maybe his programming allows him more awareness than the twinks? I don't know, I just think the concept definitely has more possibilities if you ever want to continue it.
4/18/18, 2:33 PM
Yay! A new Rubbrsome story! I hope we get more installments, because I'd love to get more depictions of Ben and Dean's mental conversion.