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4/18/18, 2:28 PM
I wish I could have found a way to return to the older roommate, but it would have broken the flow and intensity of the story. Usually, when I write this particular kind of brainwashing conspiracy story, I try to figure out some kind of business plan for the brainwashing conspiracy (as I do in "Scrubbed Clean" and "International Colors" and "Bolshoi Papa"). But here I just couldn't figure out exactly what the Labyrinth's business plan might be, so I just tried to make it more dreamlike and mythic. If YOU can figure out a good backstory for who's behind the Labyrinth and how it functions, please let me know!
Anonymous
4/18/18, 2:24 PM
This needs to continue.
Anonymous
4/18/18, 2:21 PM
Where is this going?? I gotta know.
Max
4/18/18, 2:20 PM
Amazing chapter! Especially loved Mike's efforts to resist his twinkification. Twinkified frat boys are always a favorite of mine. But what about the older roommate who has been undergoing the Bull reprogramming, presumably into the kind of hairy top man the twinks need to worship. I would love to see what happens with his conversion. I'd also love to see more about the Labyrinth. Who is behind it and how does it function?
Anonymous
4/18/18, 2:15 PM
Hot!!!
4/18/18, 1:59 PM
Thanks for the compliment and the attribution sawhorsw. Your reference to the author helped me find the original story. Here's a link for those interested https://bit.ly/2H7Krod Several people have encouraged me to advance the story with an additional chapter... stay tuned.
4/18/18, 1:54 PM
This is a rewrite of a hetero-focused story entitled "Little One: Making of a Sissy." I attempted to edit my original submission to include an attribution but editing a story doesn't seem to be possible here.
The_Supernatural_D
4/18/18, 7:13 AM
A really interesting concept. I enjoyed it, and I'd like it if you expanded on the concept in a future story.
sawhorsw
4/18/18, 5:49 AM
It's great to see that you took Robin Ecker's "Little One" and took a gay twist to it. Are you ending it because this is all she wrote? Make this version your own by advancing the story.
codypony@aol.com
4/17/18, 11:34 PM
Buddy boy Adam is doing a Lot of instructing up there..... I wonder if he hasnt created and gay conversion machine out of dear old Dad, the Top man. 'Cause, Adam? Well, he likes to watch......