Recent Comments

4/17/18, 10:00 PM
Loved it!!
blufman1
4/17/18, 8:22 PM
brilliant
jw-stuttgart@arcor.de
4/17/18, 5:29 PM
A nice little story in which essentially everything is in it, what is needed (as I understand it). I would have liked in detail two or three sentences more in one or the other passage, but the story should probably be deliberately reduced. Cool idea how the burglar Kirk exploits in every way.
Anonymous
4/17/18, 4:08 PM
You will be writing more of this story. wont you?
Anonymous
4/17/18, 1:27 PM
i hope you will continue...absolutely
Anonymous
4/17/18, 1:26 PM
nice story
TheGerman
4/17/18, 8:43 AM
Sometimes you just have to help "a little bit" to make something happen ;-) I liked to read the four episodes, although it took a little while to get going. Good job.
Boone
4/17/18, 8:22 AM
This is insanely hot! Kirk acting like a chicken is so debasing, ridiculous and exaggerated that it's delicious to imagine him humiliating himself in that way. I like the changes that you made on him, your style is quite good, and I love how he ends so mentally broken that he hopes to be robbed again and acting so weird and ridiculous in front of other men. I'd love if you let us know another adventure of the robber. Maybe he could have an encounter with a cop or two, making them to do some totally ridiculous hot actions, while wearing their uniforms.
LongtimeFan
4/17/18, 7:16 AM
Fun little story! :D Love the “gaps” that imply that the burglar is giving new commands. You also have a great talent for different kinks and fetishes (submissive, dominant, mindless...). Great job! :D
Anonymous
4/17/18, 6:12 AM
Was a bit confusing in the middle, was the burglar sending orders telepathically or?? Still made me cum though lol.