Recent Comments

sawhorsw
4/18/18, 5:49 AM
It's great to see that you took Robin Ecker's "Little One" and took a gay twist to it. Are you ending it because this is all she wrote? Make this version your own by advancing the story.
codypony@aol.com
4/17/18, 11:34 PM
Buddy boy Adam is doing a Lot of instructing up there..... I wonder if he hasnt created and gay conversion machine out of dear old Dad, the Top man. 'Cause, Adam? Well, he likes to watch......
BankStreet
4/17/18, 10:22 PM
I know it's just my own "thing," but seeing Kirk ultimately seduced/recruited to a life of crime would have been so good. Maybe next time? Thanks for a great story.
4/17/18, 10:00 PM
Loved it!!
blufman1
4/17/18, 8:22 PM
brilliant
jw-stuttgart@arcor.de
4/17/18, 5:29 PM
A nice little story in which essentially everything is in it, what is needed (as I understand it). I would have liked in detail two or three sentences more in one or the other passage, but the story should probably be deliberately reduced. Cool idea how the burglar Kirk exploits in every way.
Anonymous
4/17/18, 4:08 PM
You will be writing more of this story. wont you?
Anonymous
4/17/18, 1:27 PM
i hope you will continue...absolutely
Anonymous
4/17/18, 1:26 PM
nice story
TheGerman
4/17/18, 8:43 AM
Sometimes you just have to help "a little bit" to make something happen ;-) I liked to read the four episodes, although it took a little while to get going. Good job.