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Anonymous
4/11/18, 7:29 PM
Great work...thank you
Max
4/11/18, 7:04 PM
Hey Bleuboy, any idea when we can expect the next part? Can't wait!
Max
4/11/18, 6:17 PM
What about if "Fernando" needs Trent's likeness for further missions to convert and transform Trent's friends or colleagues as well? They could be tramsformed into "Fernandos" themselves or other slutty male prostitutes based on whatever hot pics you like. Maybe in the end they will all work at a special gay whorehouse? Not sure what the motivation would be for this kind of group takedown but you could probably think of something. Love your stories! ;-)
Anonymous
4/11/18, 4:59 PM
You could go 'alien'. I don't know how, but you could.
AeonFlux
4/11/18, 4:21 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your work with us.............it was quit HOT to read and couldn't wait ofr the next chapter.......pity it ended.....;-)
mgreene70@yahoo.com
4/11/18, 12:39 PM
Thank you nycboot. I always appreciate your comments and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Not sure what I am going to write next, but another medieval story will inevitably be written as I also love the period.
nycboot
4/11/18, 12:35 PM
Oh wow! This is my favorite of all your stories. What it lacks in terms of sex is well-compensated by the Dickensian ending, tying so many threads together and providing a convincing life-path for Belial. Also this is probably the most humorous chapter of the series (it might be the most humorous of any chapter you've posted on GSS). It reminds me of a kind of gay Hitchcockian sensibility - not belly laughs, but dark and and ironic. Gervais & Jean-Luc are really cardboard figures but in a way their romance makes me want to associate them to the romance between Rafe & Belial. Maybe you could try working with two associative romantic relationships in a future story. My interest in medieval times (and of course the chance to release one's sexuality and lust) makes me think even more than this series has been my favorite of all that you've written. Bravo!
mgreene70@yahoo.com
4/11/18, 12:14 PM
Because the newspaper was gossiping about his private grief...
Anonymous
4/11/18, 11:44 AM
I wish for more sex in the end, but oh well. Still a very nice story with a surprisingly on point moral message. Though I am confused why was Jacob angry at that article?
Anonymous
4/11/18, 6:16 AM
commented* sorry jizz fingers lmao