Recent Comments

Martin
4/9/18, 10:05 PM
Thank you so much, Willie... :) I'm really honored that you took my idea and made this great story out of it!
Anonymous
4/9/18, 5:32 PM
Haha this is actually nice when its into plot.
Anonymous
4/9/18, 5:08 PM
Really enjoying the story, even with less sex. You're a damn good writer!
4/9/18, 4:30 PM
No good deed... Hope addle gets a proper breakup she is reaching James marsden levels of romantic victim. But liked Raf and bel resolution. Barachiel is hilariously, as suspected by bel, limited. I am an insubstantial glowing ball of light...but a random knight makes me feel safe. Tasteful depictions? Surprised given how precise and cynical bel is he did not aside about the baphomet and its origins. But your writings and depictions and setup even an extender women primary setup made this extra fulfilling two chapters. Thank you I know distraction but consider compliment wish could see Barachiel dealing with eyes, friends and his amazing new life. Likely foundation for his warped psyche and maybe have him fall for someone? He, no no speculation bad Thanks for work
Anonymous
4/9/18, 4:24 PM
Why steal another body when you could just stay Fernando ;)
D
4/9/18, 3:54 PM
Great job! Totally surprised that the changes was only in his eyes. Looking forward to seeing him make it real
Anonymous
4/9/18, 3:42 PM
Basically it's a chain. The Fernando who visited Trent was a different dude. He stole Trent's appearance. Therefore Trent became the new Fernando. Now the cycle continues. This John guy in the end called Trent who calls himself Fernando. Just like the previous one, he's gonna steal John's body. That make sense ?
Anonymous
4/9/18, 3:29 PM
Super hot. I got a little confused about what happened to who.
LongtimeFan
4/9/18, 3:01 PM
Great story! Not only is it extremely hot, it really explores the dynamics of relationships, the gay community, and desire (do we say we want romantic partners when deep down, we just want living sex dolls?). Plus that twist at the end suggests that maybe Leo DIDN’T just want a completely submissive bottom...what if he was telling the truth the whole time? I love stories that work both my brains. ;) Great going!
Max
4/9/18, 2:16 PM
Very hot concept! I love this series though it can be formulaic and you definitely found a way to keep it interesting!