Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/10/18, 10:50 PM
I love this so much! I would love to see more.
4/10/18, 5:53 PM
Your story is awesome! I hope there will be many chapters to come!!!!
Anonymous
4/10/18, 4:05 PM
If you are looking for ideas, I have something in mind I would share with you. Do you accept commissions?
Anonymous
4/10/18, 3:13 PM
Loved it!!!
Willie Cici
4/10/18, 3:13 PM
Trent is an escort/bodyguard. 'Fernando' is an escort, part of a network, that captures 'johns' and converts them into network soldiers. Trent became a new 'Fernando', another soldier. The 'Fernando' that walked into Trent's hotel room stole Trent's persona. The 'John' at the end of the story is another prostitute's client, a 'jon'. He's not necessarily a target. Remember, the infomercial advertises 'sex escorts'. Fernando, the former Trent, is now working the town. Now, I have to be honest. I don't think I thought this one out. Why would 'Fernando' steal 'Trent's likeness'? Where did he go? What's his game? I would invite anyone reading the story and this comment to post suggestions for how this story could continue.
Anonymous
4/10/18, 2:28 PM
I always love the idea of being forced to live somebody else’s life....so Johnis trapped inside his new hot Latin body powerless...to live as Fernando. The escort he secretly mocked. A straight man forced to live the rest of this life as a horney, slutty boy toy.
Anonymous
4/10/18, 3:58 AM
Excellent story!!!
Anonymous
4/10/18, 3:58 AM
Excellent story!!!
Anonymous
4/10/18, 3:58 AM
I give you credit. Episodic writing is not easy. This is a great read, interesting, dare I say, thought provoking.
Anonymous
4/10/18, 3:51 AM
Where's part 3?