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D
4/9/18, 3:54 PM
Great job! Totally surprised that the changes was only in his eyes. Looking forward to seeing him make it real
Anonymous
4/9/18, 3:42 PM
Basically it's a chain. The Fernando who visited Trent was a different dude. He stole Trent's appearance. Therefore Trent became the new Fernando. Now the cycle continues. This John guy in the end called Trent who calls himself Fernando. Just like the previous one, he's gonna steal John's body. That make sense ?
Anonymous
4/9/18, 3:29 PM
Super hot. I got a little confused about what happened to who.
LongtimeFan
4/9/18, 3:01 PM
Great story! Not only is it extremely hot, it really explores the dynamics of relationships, the gay community, and desire (do we say we want romantic partners when deep down, we just want living sex dolls?). Plus that twist at the end suggests that maybe Leo DIDN’T just want a completely submissive bottom...what if he was telling the truth the whole time? I love stories that work both my brains. ;) Great going!
Max
4/9/18, 2:16 PM
Very hot concept! I love this series though it can be formulaic and you definitely found a way to keep it interesting!
nycboot
4/9/18, 1:20 PM
Oh my, what a turn of events! I loved the scene with Belial and Raphael, but has Rafe gotten to Bel's head? No more orgies? (Thanks for providing this chapter so quickly after the last!)
Anonymous
4/9/18, 1:01 PM
Interesting
Anonymous
4/9/18, 9:58 AM
Great story with hooks !! Can’t wait the next installment and see how this story ends. Hope Anthony was forced to change by Cameron, who was under total control.
May 13, 2012
Anonymous
4/8/18, 10:23 PM
Where do I submit
4/8/18, 8:17 PM
Yes, I also love the wit and jokes that come out of this chapter. I love how Lilith speaks in contemporary language but Adele and Matilda speak in ultra-forma language - it's very funny! I recognize that you used this chapter to forward the movement of the various threads, but the 2 short paragraphs you give to Didham Priory with everyone engaged in sex is such a tease. I imagine it would be the verbal description of an orgy-like Bosch painting. Could be very hot! And it's so funny because it's so easy to empathize with Belial (when he's speaking in his voice). Wonderful story. Always looking forward to the next installment!