Recent Comments

Biguynj
4/6/18, 12:57 AM
Don’t know why but really like your works kero it up . Nice visual touch
Anonymous
4/5/18, 11:09 PM
I realy hope the Reporters take down Bulges for good, and save the victmes
trytoknowyou@gmail.com
4/5/18, 10:21 PM
I hope to see more!
corinthian
4/5/18, 9:41 PM
Really enjoyed your story - many thanks.
Cigarboycody
4/5/18, 9:10 PM
Was a great first chapter!! The writing wasn't that bad for a early morning can't sleep session. Duke needs to become the mindless drone he has secretly craved becoming. Then be used to bring its friends to its Rubber Master. So more chapters please. My boy cock is hard in its rubber sheath wanting more
4/5/18, 8:54 PM
I'm currently trying to edit the post, but there seems to be some error. I can't get back to the edit page. But as soon as i can. It'll be fixed.
Swizzington
4/5/18, 7:54 PM
The writing isn't THAT bad... Keep at it dude. This community could always use more authors.
4/5/18, 7:40 PM
THANK YOU ALL FOR SUCH AWESOME COMMENTS!! I really wasn't expecting such feedback. For those who understood the story, despite the many grammatical, and spelling flaws thank you. As i said I wrote this very early in the morning, and posted it in a half awake haze. I've written hundreds of stories, and just deleted them cause i wasn't sure of how people would react to them. But I figured i would give this a shot. I will agree with writing it down in a word processor to help with grammar and spelling. Notepad isn't the best at doing such things lol. :p but can agree that it can be annoying when reading a story, and can prevent you from entering the world that is trying to be created. I just wanted to get it posted before l lost my nerve lol. There is more to come. the next chapter is where we start the mind control, and starting to slowly put him into rubber. So stayed tune, and again thank you all for the constructive feedback.
Anonymous
4/5/18, 6:46 PM
The prior comment about editing was condescending --- but accurate.
Willie Cici
4/5/18, 6:30 PM
A month of writing and editing and still there are errors. I fixed the syntax. Thanks for the comment. I hope I speak for all the contributors to this site when I say that we want the readers to leave comments and text information. It makes for better writing and better story telling.