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AeonFlux
4/5/18, 4:37 PM
Never mind post at 15:54 The story is very hot and if some people want to criticise they should buy a book from the store........ this is a site to write and share our deepdown fantasies Please keep on writing........
Anonymous
4/5/18, 4:04 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
4/5/18, 4:03 PM
I agree!! Really hot! Loved the pics.
Anonymous
4/5/18, 3:55 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
4/5/18, 3:54 PM
SBD89 Did you learn from this experience that 'writing' is not the same as 'coming up with a story'? The story you tried to write is great, and has the potential for follow-up. The writing part was awful. All you had to do is run the spell and grammar check on your word processor (presumably MSWord) and all the wrong caps and horrible grammar would be corrected in a couple of minutes. Writing requires editing, and sometimes more time spent editing than writing. Keep writing -- and editing. We want to read a well-crafted, well-written story.
Anonymous
4/5/18, 3:46 PM
I give you credit for developing episodic stories that make sense and make you want to read more. I'm loving this series. Smart and sexy!!!
Anonymous
4/5/18, 2:47 PM
Excellent
Max
4/5/18, 2:12 PM
Hmmmm. Just re-read the ending. Has Cameron already fallen under Bulge's influence more deeply, or is Anthony just more conscious of his partners hot body and hard cock now that his reprogramming has begun? ;-P Love the suspense. And the reference to the master "plotting their punishments"!
Will
4/5/18, 2:02 PM
Oh fuck yes, please can you write a second chapter?! 😍
4/5/18, 1:57 PM
Thank you guys for your kind words :). I have a pretty good idea, where i want this to go. I hope you guys Enjoy it. I'm writing the next part now. So should be up soon.